Day 2- A Quick Meeting

Friday, June 12, 2009

All 14 girls and Don milled around the elimination room waiting for the meeting to commence.

**Sharon, 26- "This is my last chance to make an impression. I NEED TO TALK TO DON!!"

As soon as they could, Taylor and Vita ran to Don and began to push one another out of the way.

"UGH!" Vita groaned."He's mine!" Taylor choked, as Vita pulled her back by the hair. She stumbled into Remy, who was pushed into Hilda. The rest of the girls were drawn to the conflict. Ceasing the opportunity, Meg began to talk to a horrified Don. "So... nice weather, huh?" she began.

**Taylor, 24- "That Vita is really starting to annoy me... if it comes down to me and her... that girl is going down."

**Vita, 26- "Its game time, and I need to step it up. No more missus nice girl. I'm gonna win this competition no matter what."

Meanwhile, trouble was brewing! Hilda had thought that Remy had purposely shoved her, and begun poking and insulting her. "What is your problem with me, huh?" Hilda shouted, getting in her face.

"Just leave me alone!" Remy yelled.

"Shut the hell up!" Hilda hollered, and Remy struck her across the face. Remy gasped and pulled her hand back, horrified. Hilda's mouth fell open.

This was followed by the loudest silence any of them had ever heard. Chanel finally broke the tension.

"Oh. No. She. Didn't!"

"Yes she did!" Hilda cried, throwing herself on top of Remy.

"AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" they both screamed.

**Don, 30- "I'm really flattered by all this competition between the girls. I just hope they don't hurt themselves."

Meanwhile, Tiffanie, Sharon, and Taryn were so appalled that they spent time becoming good friends.

"This is perfect!" Sharon clapped with delight. "Let them dig their own graves!"
"Well it's certainly working." Tiffanie muttered, lowering her glasses. "What a shame."

**Taryn, 29- "Wow. This house is actually crazy! At least some of the girls are nice."

Remy and Hilda continued to struggle until there was a huge thump as Remy kicked Hilda to the floor.

**Remy, 24- "That'll teach her to mess with me ever again. I may not look tough, but you better not cross me!"

**Hilda, 27- "What? I'm so much betta than that chick. That was embarassin'! Whatta my gonna do bout that?"

Don pulled the two struggling, muttering girls off each other. "Not exactly the wisest move, but you've certainly made your point." he told them. "Now, for some business, I'm afraid." he faced the rest of the contestants, all huddled together in a circle. "Its time for the first elimination. Please get ready."

(Any favorites? Predictions? Thanks for reading!)

Day 2- Afternoon

Chanel began to play the piano in the dining room, which was a cue to all that lunch was over. After that, everyone began to settle in to the activities of the house.


But first, Taryn, and Chanel and Kara had their reward date with Don. They got to play don't wake the llama.

**Taryn, 29- "I knew the second that we started choosing Kara and Chanel was a bad idea. They are the two best looking girls in the whole house! What was I thinking..."

Chanel kept batting her eyelashes and flirtingly putting on the llama sticks.

"Be careful!" Don grimaced. Kara was concentrating very hard. "WHOA!" Chanel said when Kara causes the sticks to fall.

"SH!" Kara said. "We don't want to wake him up!" Taryn rolled her eyes and pouted. Don was barely paying any attention to her, it was all toward Kara and Chanel.

"Hey, ladies, I'm so glad we got to do this." Don said once they were finished, hugging each of them. "Hope to see you all again tomorrow."

**Kara, 20- "OOOHH! He really is dreamy! I cannot believe he likes me! Thank god Taryn picked me to go on that date... whew."


The heat was bearing down, so a bunch of girls decided to go in the pool. It was Wendy, Tiffanie, Clarissa, Meg, Vita, and Brianne.

**Tiffanie, 25- "I love all the girls in the house. Except maybe Hilda. But they're really nice, I'm so happy to have found friends in them. Now if only Don would notice me... I really like him."

Meanwhile, Remy, Sharon, Kara, Chanel, Taylor, and Taryn were busy watching a movie and getting to know one another.

**Taylor, 24- "The house has such great entertainment.. besides the girls of course." She chuckeld. "I am just so humbled and greatful to be here right now, you have no idea!"

Finally, Sandy and Hilda were busy fighting near the bowling alley."HOW DARE YOU! I HEARD YOU WERE TALKING BEHIND MY BACK!" Hilda shouted.

"YEAH! TO REMY! WHO HATES YOU ALREADY! WHAT A BRAT!" Sandy screamed, shoving Hilda. She tripped a little, and then fell onto the slippery bowling lane, landing on her face.

"AAAAAAARRRRRRRRGH!" she yelled. Sandy gulped and ran outside to the pool.

"That's right, run away!" Hilda cried.

Back outside, Sandy and Don had joined the poolgoers, and they had a great game of marco polo going. "MARCO!" Meg yelled, just as Sandy came sliding down the slide, and Brianne yelled polo from the slide. It was a merry time, and Don laughed, surrounded by all the girls.

A few tred water in the middle, making small talk and just enjoying what could be their last day.

But all good things come to an end, of course. At 6:00 pm, Don made an announcement.

"Everyone report to the panel room now for a last minute meeting, with an elimination to follow. Thank you!"

**Wendy, 23- "Oh, no! I don't want anyone to go home! Not yet! I feel so vulnerable!"

**Brianne, 21- "I am so ready for the first elimination, to get rid of one of these ladies... sayonara, suckers!"

The first elimination loomed before them... it was inevitable. No one wanted to go home now. The only question remaining was... who?

Day 2- About and Around Lunch

Thursday, June 11, 2009

The next morning with the sunrise, the girls awoke to an announcement. "Attention all ladies. Please feel free to do whatever you please around the house. I will be wandering around, try to find me and talk to me. Happy Hunting!" Don said.

**Sandy, 28- "I like this, Everything is one big riddle, y'all."

Rising first, Sandy turned on the lights in the bedroom, making the other girls moan. "I'm tired!" Vita yelled.

"Awright, Awright!" Sandy said. Hilda jumped out of bed, ran up to Sandy yelling. "What's your problem? Turn off the lights you hick!" Hilda said, poking Sandy in the chest before heading over to the bathroom to get ready.

**Taylor, 24- "These little petty dramas are getting ridiculous. Its the second day! I'm much more preoccupied with Don liking me than I am with the other girls! Sheesh!"



Hilda and Chanel, immidately tried to take advantage of their surroundings, and skated together, discussing Don and the other girls, while Tiffanie preferred to be alone, writing in her diary. Other women started to search for Don.

"Where could he be!" Kara said, marching into the game room. "Oooh! A sauna!" she cried and ran over to it. Meanwhile, Sandy and Taylor quickly became friends and played a round of basketball.


Remy, Sharon, Meg, and Brianne decided a game of mahjong and gossip was in store."So... I don't know if you guys know anything about the other girls..." Brianne began, grabbing a tile off the board.

"Well, one thing... did you know that Vita has diabetes? Yeah, she can't eat like, anything!" Meg said. "She told me last night."

"YAWN!" Sharon moaned. "A funny thing though... Wendy snores way too much!" they all giggled.

"Oh!" Remy said. "There was this one thing about Chanel... did you know both her parents are in jail? They're convicted felons for a bank robbery!"

**Remy, 24- "I really feel myself getting close to Sharon, Meg, and Bee. All of them are really great people, and I just love talking to them. It makes me happy that I get to hang out with them in the house!"

"You know who's a bit of an oddball..." Brianne started.

"Who?" Taryn said, wandering over.

"Clarissa. She's just so weird. She keeps to herself all the time, no one knows anything about her!"

"Well, give her a break, its only the second day." Meg sighed.

"That's true." said Taryn.

"I still don't think she's on the same playing field as us, though." Remy scoffed. "What a freak."

Suddenly a loud scream issued from the panel room, as Sandy began to scream.

"YOU LITTLE TRAMP! I'M GONNA GIT YOU FOR THAT!"

Wendy burst in. "Guys... come quick! Hilda just threw a drink in Sandy's face!"

As all the girls ran upstairs, another announcement rang through the house. "Attention... its time for a house lucheon... all report to the dining hall now!" Don's voice called over a loudspeaker.

Chaos insued quite quickly as every girl abandoned all caution and sprinted to the dining room to grab a seat next to the bachelor.

"It's mine!" Taylor screamed, at the head of the pack.

"Not if ah git there first!" Sandy yelled, slipping past her. There was a desperate struggle as thirteen girls tried to fit through one stairwell at the same time.

Finally, emerging from the sauna, all hot and bothered, Kara stumbled into the bright lights. "Oh! Lunch! Yay!" she called out.

The fourteen contestants entered the dining hall and found Don sitting at one of the tables. "Everyone grab a plate, and feel free to sit wherever you like!" he called.

**Wendy, 23- "Oh, I just knew I had to sit near Don... I really want to stay in this competition."

There was a mad rush to get the 3 vacant seats at Don's table, but in the end, Hilda, Sandy, and Taylor won out.
Don stood up. "First, I have an announcement to make. Congratulations to... Taryn! You were the winner of last nights challenge. Please come to my room for an hour of fun right after the meal. Also, you can pick two friends to join you."

There were a bunch of moans, and some polite clapping. "OH! THANK YOU SO MUCH!" Taryn leapt up, excited. "Um... i pick... Chanel and Kara!" she cried. (they were her highest relationships on the panel.)

"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!" the three of them squealed. And with that, everyone was settled in.

"So what are you guys' first impressions?" Sharon asked.

Wendy answered first. "Well, I think Taylor is pretty well off. Just look at her." Sure enough, she was busy chatting away Don while Sandy and Hilda glowered at each other.

"And Taryn. Since she won the challenge, she's basically guaranteed to stay this week."

"I just hate Hilda." Remy said. "Hate, hate, hate her."

"Ummm... I think that Wendy, you'll be fine." Sharon said.

"Really?" she answered.

"Well yeah, he liked you alot yesterday."

At the next table, Tiffanie and Meg were asking Kara how her hair got so blonde.

"Well, you know, I go to my stylist every month, and she has this stuff... what's it called... anyway, it gets my hair all dyed..."

"Bleach?" Clarissa supplied, looking incredulously at Kara.

"YES!" she shouted. "And it looks almost white. Anyway, it keeps me sexy. My real hair is a nasty brownish blonde color thats just... ugh."

"I usually dye my hair too. Purple, green, pink, blue... depends on my mood." Clarissa joked.

Meg tried to look interested, but Tiffanie and Kara looked at each other and giggled.

**Clarissa, 22- "I just don't feel close to these girls at all. We don't have thigns in common, I just don't enjoy talking to them at all. Its very frustrating."

Meg went on. "Well, I love my hair. I love styling it in the morning, don't you agree, Tiffanie?"

"Well, I used to make a big fuss about me appearence, but I'm past that now. I love my hair just up, and out of the way. It's so much easier around work!"

At the next table the four girls were having a great time chatting together.

"I'm really into animals!" Vita said, smiling. "I have two dogs."

"Well, I can't do anything, without my little puppy in my bag, Doodles." Brianne said. "I take him for monthly spa treatments."

"Wow. You must be loaded!" Taryn said.

"If only you knew the half of it!" Brianne said. "I'll tell you later, Tar." she said.

"Hey, aren't you going to eat anything besides salad, Vita?" Chanel asked.

"I can't... I have diabetes, and I just stay on a strict diet." Vita said.

**Vita, 26- "Oh, I hope they don't judge me. It's really not a big deal, but you know how things can get blown out of proportion!"

"That sucks, Vita." Chanel said sympathetically. She lowered her voice. "The food sucks here anyway. You're not missing much."

Finally, at Don's table, Taylor was getting very busy with Don.

"I love being healthy and working out... I can tell you work out too...Oh! We should go running one day!" Taylor said.

"Just like your mouth." Hilda said under her breath, then went back to chatting up Don. Sandy just sat there, glowering at Hilda.

"Me 'n my friends love going runnin' by the creek. I's great!" Sandy said to Taylor and Don.

"So what else do you girls like to do?" Don asked.

"Well, I love to garden, I's a passion, y'know? I run a farm with my parents, and it takes a lot of outdoors work and labor. But ah love every minute of it!" Sandy said.

Taylor cut her off. "I love helping people. That's like, my job. I change my client's lives. In fact, I basically save their lives!" she gushed.

"Wow, are you a doctor or something?" Don asked.

**Hilda, 27- "She's a nutritionist. Big whoop. Honey was layin' it on a little thick, if you ask me. And trust me, she's gonna regret it."

"What do you like, Hilda?"

"I love everything!" Hilda blurted out, making Don laugh.

**Don, 30- "Wow, each girl was impressing me! I really don't know what to do! I feel like I haven't gotten to know them that well, and already tonight, I have to send a girl home. I'm so confused..."

All in all, the competition was really starting up.

Day 1- The First Challenge

All the girls assembled in front of Don. Some were nervous, other's frantically checking their reflections in mirrors. the room twittered with anticipation.

"I'd like to formally welcome you all to this house. Its weird... that one of the girls in this room will be my fiance soon...wow. Let me tell you about this challenge. In order to get to know you better, you will come up here, and you have 3 minutes to tell us anything you want about yourself. That's it. Whoever I feel has done the best at the end of the night will win this challenge, and I will announce the winner and their prize at breakfast tomorrow. Its begin with... Brianne." Don finished, holding his hand out to the crowd.

Brianne carefully stepped up, looking very poised and elegant. "Hi, everyone... my name is Brianne Catalano. How you all doing tonight?"

No one responded. Undeterred, she resumed. "I want to tell everyone the reason I am here. Lately, I feel lost, and overwhelmed. I just want to find myself. Who is Brianne? You know? I think this experience would be amazing, and I am just so happy to share it with you all. Thanks."

Brianne sped to her chair. Soon a few others went up. Some were successes, others let their nerves get the best of them. Next up was Sharon. "Well... I don't know..." She clearly had stage fright. "My birthday is May 28th... Uh... I love fall... and my favorite color is yellow."

"I can tell by her hair!" Taylor whispered to the girls around her, who giggled. A few girls got up, some grasping the concept, others not. Vita took a spot on the stage and made light conversation, and some funny jokes, to which Don and the girls laughed appreciatively.

Kara went up, got in front of the mic, cleared her throat, and then stared into space. "My dogs name is Fifi. I love girly things... I'm very nice... and fun too, ask my friends... I love boys!"

Sandy got up and stood her ground. "I really am here to win Don over. I don't mean to be blunt with y'all, but that's the way its gone be." She paused. "And don't hog the bathrooms!" she said, to mutual shock.

While Taylor was up, Kara, Remy, and Meg all became friends. "What do you hope to get by being here, besides Don?" Remy whispered to Meg.

"Oh gosh, I'm up!" she exclaimed, turning red.

Meg scrambled to the microphone, and she said a few things about herself. But at the end, said this: "I really want to find love in this world, and I am praying that it is you, Don. I really want this to work out. Thanks for listening."

Finally, Taryn stood up to make her speech. "Oh, god she's big!" Hilda told Clarissa and Wendy.

Taryn had heard, and the room got uncomfortably silent. Taryn stood there, blinkling back tears.

"Sorry... this is alot to take in!" Taryn glanced at Don. "I just wanted to say, I am so happy to be here. Words cannot express my gratitude!" She took a minute to gather her thoughts. "My weight should not be the problem. I wish people would stop looking at that and start seeing something else! You guys, and of course, Donald, look great! I wish you would be less ignorant and see different types of beauty. Just leave me alone, shut up, and start looking at the person inside me!" Taryn shouted. "I can always get into shape!" she added. A few girls smiled, truly touched.

Don stood up. "What a great night. I'm thrilled to know you all a little better. With that, though, I think I should say goodnight to you all."

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Afterward, all of them, a few after taking showers and what not, went to bed. (I love when they were all asleep together!) And finally, so did Don.

Day 1- Meet and Greet

Wednesday, June 10, 2009

**Don, 30- "The woman I am going to marry... is walking through that door right now. This is the biggest opportunity I've ever had in my whole life. I'm not wasting it. I'm determined... tonight, I'm meeting my soulmate. This time, it's for real.

As each girl arrived one by one, the house began to fill.

A few of the girls mingled, trying to make friends, and Donald Sinclaire walked out to greet them."Hello ladies, lets all get aquainted." he said in a smooth, sultry voice.

**Chanel,28- "Just seeing him there I knew I had to have him... its like... he's just gorgeous. And rich. But hes gorgeous!"

**Meg, 30- "Wow. That's all I have to say. He's a knockout... and he's pretty nice too!"

Some of them mulled around, others eager to please. Taylor ran up to Don.

"Himynameistaylorthishouseisamazingimsohappytobehereyouarefine!" she said in one breath.

Also to approach him was Sharon. "Pleased to meet you." she said, and walked away.

**Sharon, 26- "Play a little hard to get, and not throwing your self at him is the way to stand out, I think."

Others tried to get aquainted. Pulling out a football, Sandy approached Taylor. "Wanna play?" Elsewhere, Wendy and Brianne quickly realized they had lots in common and instantly became thick as thieves.

Tiffanie, who had been shy to approach the bachelor, was soon saved when Sharon came up and introduced herself.

Downstairs, in the dining room, word had gotten out that Don was upstairs. Hilda screamed. "Those chicks better not be stealing my time with him!" She ran for the stairs, shoving Remy out of the way.

"Excuse me!" she said, grabbing Hilda's arm. "What do you think your doing! At least apologize!"

"Um, excuse me girl, don't have an attitude! I really don't care what you think of my anyway, so shut up."

Remy groaned. "Well, it doesn't really matter when you meet him, since he's never going to like you anyway!"

They continued like this for quite some time. Meanwhile, Kara, who had been applying her makeup, suddenly ran to the elevator and the stairs, unsure of what to do next. "Should I take the stairs... no... which one's faster... shoot!"

Two girls sat by themselves, completely out of their element. One was Taryn, who looked utterly confused. The other was Clarissa, who just looked disgusted that the other women were slobbering all over Don. "And your muscles! Just divine!" Vita said, smiling and swinging her hair over her should, batting her eyelashes.

**Vita,26- "I got this one in the bag. I think I'm staying past the first elimination!"

"C'mon girls, its 8:00. It's time for the first challenge of the competition!" Don said. "Head to the panel room."

Downstairs, Sandy was busy trying to break up the fighting between Hilda and Remy.

**Sandy, 28- "Ah juss couldn't believe that some girls were fightin' this early! It was really childish.

"NOW LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE! WE MISSED OUR CHANCE!" Hilda screamed.

"MY FAULT! NOT REALLY! ARGH!" Remy screamed, and ran upstairs, past Taylor, who was now trying to show Kara how to work the vending machines.

**Hilda, 27- "I really can't stand Remy. I think we clashed already! Oh... I better win this challenge. Stupid Remy."

The whole household settled into the elimination room, and sat in the chairs provided. A mic sat on the small stage in front of them. The first challenge was about to begin, and the air was thick with excitement and tension.

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(a few notes... I made all the girls and Don go in one room and then put free will on, and let them do what they wanted. Most stuck around to talk to each other, or Don (especially Chanel) while Kara left to lounge on a couch for 5 hours (!) and some left to play football. What was funny was that Remy and Hilda decided to argue, then poke, then shove, and throw drinks for hours, just back and forth. Sandy kept trying to break them up. all this that you are seeing is autonomous!!)