Vita Duva, Ninth Place

Wednesday, December 30, 2009

**Vita- "I'm really sad right now! I feel like I might have dissapointed my family, but I know that they're already so proud of me. Just the idea that I'm here! I mean, that's huge! I've learned so much about myself, and other people. This is bigger than anything I've ever done. I made it through casting week and five eliminations. I tried my hardest and that's all you can do."

Vita had left the competition.



***This was a particularly sad elimination for me, since when I played the challenge on my computer (before it broke) Vita was the winner! I was upset to see her go. She had the second lowest relationship with Don, but the girl who had the lowest happened to be the best dancer, so I picked the next worst, Vita.

A Suprise Elimination

Monday, December 28, 2009

Tiffanie, Taylor, Vita, Chanel, Kara, Taryn, Meg, Brianne, and Remy lined up on stage. The air was thick with tension.

"All of you did wonderfully." Don adressed them. "But as you know, there can only be one winner."

"Right now I'd like to talk about some of your performances... Tiffanie."

"Yeah?" she gulped.

"What happened? I thought you guys had it in the bag. At the ned you just looked a little disoriented." said Don. "Taylor, you did a great job. You had wonderful presence."

"Next. The lumberjacks, (Kara looked down nervously) all three of you had great dancing skills, especially Taryn."

"Finally, the smustlers. Chanel, you were terrible. No two ways about it. And Vita, you let your team down at the end."

Don now readdressed the entire group. "One of you is the winner... and one of you is going home. The winner will be announced early tomorrow."

"The person who I call now must leave here, return to the house, pack your bags, and go home. I've thought long and hard about this, and if you can't impress me, then you'll never be my wife."

"The bachelorette who is be going home tonight is..."

"Vita."

"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! " she cried into her hands, falling to her knees.

Don looked at his feet.

"I wanted it so bad." Vita was sobbing with despair.

"I'm sorry." Tiffanie bent down and put her arms around Vita. "I'm so sorry Vita."

"Waaaaaahh."

"Shhh... it's okay. C'mon, let's go." Tiffanie lifted her up and helped Vita off the stage, through the crowd, and away from everything.

Day 11- Dance Like There's No Tomorrow

Saturday, December 26, 2009

The sun was shining, the birds were chirping, and the afternoon was just beginning, but for the bachelorettes that meant only one thing: the challenge, where the stakes had never been higher.

The stress was taking its toll on some of the contestants, most notably the highly irritable Taylor.

"Watch where you're going, Chanel! That's the second time you walked into me!"

Chanel burst into tears, sobbing into her hands.

**Chanel, 28- "This ish jub soo nerfwoss right nowb!"

"All right, ladies?" Don asked.

**Meg, 30- "Well some girls are crying, but I'm having a blast! This is really so exciting. I mean, I'm all dressed up, and I'm wearing hair extensions, for goodness sake!"

"Girls, take your places. The show is beginning soon!" Don called out.

They scrambled to take their spots, and fell silent. Soon the other guests chatter had subsided as well.

Don resumed. "I am very pleased to welcome two special guests with us today, here to help us host the show.

Riverblossom Hills, please welcome Saleisha Pace and Bridget Sullivan, season one contestants!"

The crowd went wild, but Kara turned to Brianne and whispered, "Who are they? Just some reality show contestants? How silly!"

Brianne rolled her eyes and smacked her head. "Kara, if we lose because of you, you're dead!"

"All right everyone, time to kick this competition into gear!" Bridget told everyone."Our first group of girls really know how to shake it. Dancing to the Hula is Taylor Wadell, Tiffanie Zahradka, and Meg Short!"

The they started, and it was clear that they knew what they were doing.

However, toward the end, each girl spun around, but Tiffanie forgot her steps!

"Thank you, thank you!" Saleisha said as they finished. "That was very relaxing. Our next group of girls, dancing Three Lakes very own slap dance, is Taryn Kramer, Brianne Catalano, and Kara Meade!"

They started, slapping and yelled, Brianne still worried Kara would ruin it all.

Luckily the three of them had found their niche and they did a fantastic job.

Toward the end Kara did get a little funky, but luckily few noticed.

**Taryn, 29- "That was so... so... exhilarating! I had so much fun, and we did great! Finally, I'm coming back!"

"Last, but certainly not least," Bridget told them. "We have our final bachelorettes!"

"Dancing to the very popular smustle, give it up for Vita Duva, Remy Geller, and Chanel Thompson!" Saleisha said.

Things began a little shakily especially for Chanel. She was still disoriented from being so stressed. Unfortunately, she only made things worse for herself.

She forgot steps. Luckily she picked it up and soon no one could stop them... no one except Vita.

On their final steps, Vita, who had always been very self conscious, lost control and fell over, and had a hard time recovering. She blushed and stood there awkwardly while Chanel and Remy finished.

"Oh well, thanks girls!" Bridget said. "Nice job."

"They stunk!" Saleisha whispered, accidentally into the microphone.

"Thank you Bridget and Saleisha!" Don cried to the crowd. "This has been a fun afternoon, but its about to get a lot less funner."

"It's time for a surprise elimination."

DUN DUN DUN.

Day 11- Heating Up

Sunday, December 20, 2009

Day 11 began, and with it, the nine girls fresh ambition to steal Don's heart.

**Taylor, 24- "Honestly, people freaking out at me needs to stop. Meg is such a little jerk for telling Don about me. It's not about him. It's about us. To think, I was almost eliminated! I HATE HER SO MUCH! And I'm getting revenge!"

Everyone was getting ready for breakfast, eager to get to the next challenge that lay ahead that afternoon.

**Taryn, 29- "Whew. So I was in the bottom two last night, and let me tell you, it was just... terrible.

It's the scariest thing. My heart was pounding so hard, and I really thought it was going to be me... oh gosh, I'm so happy to still be here!"

Breakfast was a happy affair for most of the bachelorettes, all except for one somber resident, Tiffanie.

**Tiffanie, 25- "Well of course it's great to be called early every week, but unfortunately I'm missing my friend. *Cries* Sharon was my best friend in the whole house, ever since the first five minutes. I was really sad to see her go. She was a wonderful person."

Over at one table, Kara was amusing Tiffanie, Vita, and Taylor with her efforts to eat cereal with a knife.

"This is too hard." Kara moaned, dipping it in.

Meanwhile, Remy, Meg, and Taryn were enjoying the benefits of eating with Don.

"What's your favorite evening?" Don asked them all.

"A romantic night in, just watching movies and talking." Taryn smiled. "We'd-" Remy cut across her.

"Oh, I like a night on the town!" Remy sighed. "I'd get all dressed up, and he would bring me flowers -something expensive, none of this carnation crap- and-"

Meg answered this time. "I would love a walk on the beach, hand in hand, a cute candlelit dinner-"

"It was my turn!"

"Mine!"

"It was neither of yours, it was mine!"

Don was amused.

Midway through breakfast, Don stood up. Chatter ceased immediately, and Kara's cry of, "Are you sure this is a spoon, guys?" rang out.

"Thank you." Don began. "Shortly after this meal we will meet outside, where you will receive the instructions for your next challenge."

After that there was a mad scramble to go upstairs and get ready. Don, with a little help from Remy, stayed behind to talk and clean up.

* * * *

They met on the lawn at eight.

**Vita, 26- "I'm an easily excited person, and the thought of the next challenge is getting me excited!"

"Attention bachelorettes!" Don started. He held a hat in front of him "Right now, please pick a number, and then read it out loud."

All of the girls did so, with cries of "THREE!" and "Did you get this one? Yeah!"

Soon they had been split into three teams of three.

"If you haven't guessed, today you will be... dancing!" Don announced. "It's a competition, set on a stage, and fans of the show will be watching. I will pick a winning team, and a winning member. Each team will get a different dance to learn, and a different costume."

"Here we go..."

"Team 1, doing the Hula, is Taylor, Meg, and Tiffanie."

"Team 2, with the Slap Dance, is Taryn, Kara, and Brianne."

"Team 3, performing the Smustle, is Vita, Chanel, and Remy. Now get on your costumes!"

"You will be judged on how well you dance, how well you work together, and most importantly, (and I cannot stress this enough) how your personality is shown, through hard work, determination, and fun."

**Chanel, 28- "I dunno what he's talking about, but this should be a piece of cake."

"One more thing..." Don added. "As soon as the challenge is over, and I pick the winner, there will be an elimination."

Every contestant was shocked.

"No date, no panel, no second chance... you're going home."

Episode Six: Just Dance

Previously on- Looking For Love with Donald Sinclaire: An incredible challenge gave the ten remaining women a run for their money, turning out to be both strenuous and revealing. Meg and Remy won it all, and proved themselves in our bachelor's eyes. At a group date, gossip was shared, and girls were trashed, especially Taylor. But in the end it was Taryn's lack of effort at the challenge and Sharon's lack of attraction that landed them in the bottom two. Taryn was spared, making Sharon the fifth girl SENT HOME.

Now only nine women are left... WHO WILL BE ELIMNATED TONIGHT?!

*gameplay notes*

***every two days before elimination I add the lifetime relationships to the daily relationships. Then I see who is a friend, best friend, crush, or love, etc. Whoever has the lowest on Don's panel is sent home. or in a tie, whoever has a lower relationship with Don on their panel is sent home. Near the finals, though, I also take in things like the scope room action or chemistry into account. Finally, 80% of what you see is autonomous. I make no effort to make them fight or talk to Don. I only make them interact at dates and challenges.